Deforestation caused by human activity is happening in many parts of the world, with serious results for environment. What do you think can be done to solve this problem?
Plants are the crucial part of our earth and cutting of trees is done by people in many countries for better infrastructure but in the result, it can harm the environment directly as well as indirectly. More plantation can protect us from different health hazards.
Admittedly, in developing countries where making new roads, huge buildings and providing good quality of sanitation system, humans cut the trees to vast the area and make new colonies at that place where the forest was and make surroundings vulnerable. On the one hand, masses cut down the forest and sell them which ultimately help in their economic issues, whereas, government utilized that wood in furniture, making doors from that wood. A common man also used those woody things at his home as well. Additionally, clearing the more land from greenery causing to reach the sun lights directly to the earth which influenced soil and soil organisms, which actively work in the wetland, that is dangerous for agriculture.
on the other hand, where deforestation is occurring for the benefit of humanity, although have some health-related issue such as breathing problems. In this era, transportations rate is quite high and due to more vehicles, more smoke has come from the motors into the environment which makes the atmosphere more polluted. Because of more pollution in the air, more people are facing many skin diseases such as allergy and pimples etcetera as well as asthma and lungs disorders.
To recapitulate, in my opine, people should have to grow more plants at houses and surroundings so that more oxygen can be produced which is not only beneficial for the environment but also for the other creatures.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, whereas, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07194244604 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82173094383 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604316546763 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.2909611799 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.0 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116709230421 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0458173083277 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457407114311 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0810523372367 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431629324279 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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