In regarding to the path to success in any field, this statement put revitalization through new leadership prior to all the other factors. I agree with the claim partly. It is arbtitary to define the mehtod of success.There are many ways to success at any area, we should not simply narrow down them in a certain way like changing leaders.
Indeed,there are some fields we need fresh air. The government should the best choice of reelect to maintain its power and prevent authoratarian diction. No body want the history of the War II come back again, which hitler may rule the world. So it is a health government to keep alive with reelect.what's more, I doubt is it necessary to define five years of leadership is timely.In my opinion,it should depend ot the fact of a nation. In China it's 5 years whilethe US 4 years.
Secondly,with the development of economy, there are more challenges in business area.The world is keeping changing, decades ago, we go to big shopping mall to buy all we need in life, nowadays,we can purchase online which is a tremendous promotion. On the other hand, if a company board could not maintain fresh mind, it would the a disaster of a company, Kodak films, which were famous all over the world, slumped qucikly after the emergence of digital camera.Nokia cellphones, likewise, couldn't conquor the market anymore after the invetion of iphone.it is essential to be abreast with the trend in the business, so the importance of revitalization through new leadership emerges.
Thirdly,on the contray, there are also some area where the stability comes first.Educaion,like schools, do not need more modification,as the mission of educaion is cultivate people.
In conclusion, I agree with the claim partly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, likewise, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 14.8657303371 7% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 2235.4752809 65% => OK
No of words: 290.0 442.535393258 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02413793103 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03575404404 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624137931034 0.4932671777 127% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 704.065955056 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 110.352811725 60.3974514979 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.416666667 118.986275619 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 23.4991977007 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.25 5.21951772744 216% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 7.80617977528 205% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209754139622 0.243740707755 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688684376924 0.0831039109588 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063604087879 0.0758088955206 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0964990731774 0.150359130593 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0824065615796 0.0667264976115 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.1392134831 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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