Educational institutes play a vital role in maintaining the health of the students. Some individuals assert that academies do not contribute enough to educate children about taking care of their physical and mental fitness. I strongly agree with the view. Irresponsible and money minded management of schools and neglect of physical education are the two main factors to support the argument.
To commence with, school management does not warn canteens inside the campus to sell packaged and junk food items. Young children love fast food and they buy it without thinking about the consequences and administration allows to do so with an intention of earning more profit, even being known to detrimental effects of these on the children's fitness. For example, in my school, all the confectioneries used to keep burgers, hot-dogs and fries and other fried eatables, which we had to buy in case of hunger because we had no option except these. So, schools are more oriented towards monetary gains rather than the health of teenagers.
Moreover, physical education is largely ignored. Many educational organizations are only interested in increasing academic performance of their students and they are forced to live sedentary lifestyle due to a burden of homework. Even if there are dedicated hours for physical training, often, they are utilized properly. For example, my cousin is in higher secondary class and his school is enforcing mandatory ten hours classroom study and 4 hours work to do at home, which leaves no time to play. Thus, schools are failed to make students look after their health.
To conclude, schools are not performing any action towards making the children to lead a healthy lifestyle, instead, they are more drawn towards their monetary benefits and academic records. If it continues so, soon, the young generation will suffer from major health problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 227, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'doing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: doing
... consequences and administration allows to do so with an intention of earning more pr...
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Line 4, column 278, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...will suffer from major health problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, moreover, second, so, thus, for example, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1580.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23178807947 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76833866436 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629139072848 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.6895409952 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.333333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1333333333 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234134594051 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710515343224 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580903981527 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132789268767 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505998613548 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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