You have borrowed something from your friend for a party, but it was damaged during the party. Write a letter to your friend and say
- What was it?
- How was it damaged?
- What will you do about it?
Dear Sarah,
I hope this letter finds you well. Thank you so much for borrowing beautiful dress for my sister wedding party. It was so kind of you. I should say, when I wore your dress I looked like a queen.
I wish you were here. I am so sorry to say, I ruined your dress by a mistake. Everything seems to be prefect until server dinner. Unfortunately, my table was not very good. I had to sit near my seven years old cousin. To be honest, I cannot stand near him. He is a boy. Anyways, during the dinner, he fall out some sauces on my dress. I am sure you can imagine my face, my face col...
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Sentence: Anyways, during the dinner, he fall out some sauces on my dress.
Description: The fragment he fall out is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace fall with verb, past tense
Sentence: Everything seems to be prefect until server dinner.
Error: prefect Suggestion: perfect
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 19 10
No. of Words: 192 200
No. of Characters: 715 1000
No. of Different Words: 118 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.722 4.0
Average Word Length: 3.724 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.062 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 32 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 15 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 7 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 6 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 10.105 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 3.754 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.316 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.342 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.453 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.184 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4