You travelled by a bus company and your suitcase got damaged. write a letter to the manager of bus company. In your letter:
1. Give details of your journey
2. What and when your suitcase was damaged
3. ask the company to pay for your suitcase
Dear sir,
I am writing to complain about the damage caused to my new suitcase while traveling by bus of your company.
I boarded the Delhi-Lucknow volvo bus on 22nd december. Bus started from Delhi at 9 PM and I reached Lucknow by next day at 11 AM.
Since my suitcase was heavy, I but that into the luggage compartment of the bus. But after reaching my destination, I checked that there were a lot of scratches on my suitcase and its handle was also broken. When I complained to the bus conductor, he said that it is not our responsibility to handle the luggage.
While booking a ticket online, it was clearly mentioned on your website that your company takes care of the luggage safety. And also my suitcase weighed below 30kg as per your company's policy. Therefore, i expect that your company should pay for my suitcase. I am attaching the photographs of my suitcase along with the copy of its bill.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully
ABC
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 35, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (volvo) must be used with a third-person verb: 'buses', 'busses'.
Suggestion: buses; busses
...y. I boarded the Delhi-Lucknow volvo bus on 22nd december. Bus started from Delh...
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Line 9, column 205, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...as per your companys policy. Therefore, i expect that your company should pay for...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 815.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68390804598 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68166733116 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632183908046 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8524157465 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.9166666667 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.08333333333 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.391334233447 0.216113520407 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14349842555 0.0766984524023 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0975556350505 0.0603063233224 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177200112724 0.12726935374 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135880348459 0.0580467560999 234% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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