Your family is going to move to another town. Write a letter to the Principal of a local school asking if they will accept your son.
Dear Principal,
I feel a great pleasure writing to you, to ask for an admission to my son studying in 8th standard in your school, which is one of the prestigeous institutions in the town.
As part of the new assignment in my role in the company, we are shifting from Atlanta to Houston this month-end. I can imagine how difficult it is, to accomodate a pupil in the middle of the academic year, but my ward is very bright to understand the concepts and able to cope up with the environment.
he stood top among the mammoth strength of his batch and received best student award for three continuous years for his academic percentile and active participation in all the physical activities conducted. he has best interest in mathematics and Chemistry and would like to choose these subjects as main for this year. Apart from these, he is also interested in games such as football, swimming. Kindly consider the request and try to provide an entry.
Regards,
Srujana.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Principal, I feel a great pleasure writing to you, ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...ble to cope up with the environment. he stood top among the mammoth strength of...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'received the best'.
Suggestion: received the best
...g the mammoth strength of his batch and received best student award for three continuous year...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
... all the physical activities conducted. he has best interest in mathematics and Ch...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'has the best'.
Suggestion: has the best
...l the physical activities conducted. he has best interest in mathematics and Chemistry a...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd try to provide an entry. Regards, Srujana.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, apart from, i feel, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 814.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81656804734 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79434071726 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.686390532544 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.7735237192 44.8134815571 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.285714286 76.5299724578 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1428571429 16.8248392259 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 4.34317383033 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0729669580997 0.216113520407 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0259371705282 0.0766984524023 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686233029304 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0728995703579 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103095561091 0.0580467560999 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 8.37731958763 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 70.7449484536 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.