Getting further study is the best way to change one's life from poverty. As there are some students who can not afford the tuition of universities, the government should take measures to help them. To what extend the surpport it should be is an meaningful question. But in all of the means, there this no support for free-of-all choice included as I believe.
To begin with, The Government should not take the whole charge of the tuition fee for the students who cannot afford to. The Government should not appropirate this funding as there are so many filed need to take care of in the modern society. I believe the bset way should be the government enact implements to offer students education loan with no interest. When they get jobs, they can pay back to the bank within several years. In the educaiton loan area, the USA and other developed contries have been made a good example for years, which the whole socitey benefit from the high educaiton.
Moreover, the Government should alledge the society , to help these students in the name of sponsorship or allowance. The students in need will feel being honored when the get help from companies or foundations.
There is another concern that I worry about. It will make trouble like fraud or bribe if the governments offer some of the students tuition fee. There is no free lunch in in the world. When this all-free measure executes, there may be some the students who do not want to pay for their tuition fee, but they can in fact, make fake documents to identify their poverty. This fraud will make bad influence through the university. What's worse, if they want fake the file, they may bribe the official who take charge. This corruption is not rare in other area, it could happen in the university if the governments offer the "free lunch" for students, who they want to help the poor in the beginnig, however.
In coclusion, it is not a good choice if the government want to help the poor students in freeing their tuition fees. As I suggested previously, the government can play a median role in education loan from banks and alleging for the society, which would be better.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, moreover, so, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1787.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 376.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75265957447 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50717998851 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484042553191 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.3200602552 60.3974514979 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.35 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.95 5.21951772744 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250952452388 0.243740707755 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777219750161 0.0831039109588 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697631097599 0.0758088955206 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142789942935 0.150359130593 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446085828587 0.0667264976115 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 14.1392134831 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 48.8420337079 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 12.1743820225 65% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 100.480337079 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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