Governments should focus on solving immediate problems of today rather than trying to solve the anticipated problems of the future.
The author here is suggesting that the government should focus on solving the current problems and should not focus on the future problems.The statement itself is debatable and would generate good arguments. Here I would like to take a diplomatic stand for this.Let us analyze the reasons.
The government is basically the body that works for the betterment of the people of state or country. So, the governmnent should opt for different ways to keep their citizens happy. If the government focuses only on the immediate issues then the citizzens may be satisfied intially but later it can create a problem for the citizens themselves. If there is a possibility of any natural calamity predicted by the weather department and the government is only focussing on the immediate issues then there are very high chance that the particular state or the country may suffer from great damage in terms of lives of people or in terms of economy.
If there is prediction of a recession kind of situation in the nearby future and if the government doesn't take any precautions then there will be huge economical damage that could have been avoided. Also, if it is anticipated that there will be disease breakout in the country and if the government is not prepared for that kind of situation then it will not yield good results for the government and as well as their citizens.
Looking at the other side of the coin, if the government focuses only on the future problems then the citizens might suffer some problem. If there is a case that government is planning a big investment for the future which might profit them and therefore they impose heavy tax on the citizens then the citizens will be vey unhappy about that.Or if there is a case that the government is trying to develop a future project and for that their will be some cutoff of the employes from the government then it will not have good effects.This situtaion worsens if there is already a problem of less employment prevailing among the citizens.
Also if there is a case that in the particular country there are more important issues prevalant in the society that the government should address on immediate terms for example poverty, corruption and so on and if at that time the government focuses on the future issues then it will be big problem. If the government is not focussing on the current problems like corruption then the citizens will be vey unhappy and will doubt the working of the government. The government should not take of their mind from the current issues also.And working on the current issues may result in the knowledge of any future problem that is likely to occur.
So, we can say that there can be problems if the government focuses only on the current issues and not on the future issues or vice versa then that might lead to one or other problem.So, the effective solution can be to maintain a very good balance between them. Because if the government wants to show their working to the citizens then they will have to resolve the current prevailing issues and also they will have to focus on the future predicted issues also. This will make the government look good in the eyes of their citizens.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, then, therefore, well, for example, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 30.0 12.4196629213 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 31.0 12.9106741573 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2642.0 2235.4752809 118% => OK
No of words: 555.0 442.535393258 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76036036036 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.85370353223 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57738663005 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.358558558559 0.4932671777 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 829.8 704.065955056 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 23.0359550562 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 104.744033243 60.3974514979 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.125 118.986275619 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.6875 23.4991977007 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3125 5.21951772744 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229151937644 0.243740707755 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0966789416907 0.0831039109588 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749379031376 0.0758088955206 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141572350102 0.150359130593 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487478754982 0.0667264976115 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 14.1392134831 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 48.8420337079 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.1743820225 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.92 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 11.2143820225 139% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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