In this modern society, parenthood plays a major role in every individual's life. However, a fair amount of people assert that educational institutes should be responsible to educate children about effective parenting. I firmly disagree with the notion. I will shed light on the reasons and requirement to be a skilled parent in ensuing paraghraphs. To begin with, there are multifarious points throw the light on pros of this idea. It is of paramount important that the centre of learning should give priority in teaching acedemic subjects rather than parental role. To be specific, it would not useful for them in fetching jobs to have a financial stability and better career in future. Thus, it is not lucrative for younger one's to learn how to be a efficient parent in their early ages. Moreover, in schooling days adolescents have immature and careless nature. If schools provide them knowledge regarding parental role, it will affect their innocence and could impose strain on their brain. Additionally, they would get distract from their studies. As a result, may score poor in their examination which automatically affect their holistic development.
In regards to be a skilled parent whether a mother or father. Firstly, they should have a better understanding. Secondly, a polite nature and vast knowledge about languages so that they can educate and communicate with their children. Thirdly, they should have a stable career and wealth to protect their children's future. Lastly, they should have the ability to tackle and hardship of life.
In conclusion, although schools and teachers play a great role in everyone's life. But it is parents and family's duty to edicate their children about future role as a parent and should provide them after a certain age.
Votes
Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: xun
Essay Categories
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 64, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
... parenthood plays a major role in every individuals life. However, a fair amount of people ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 350, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... skilled parent in ensuing paraghraphs. To begin with, there are multifarious po...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 727, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...a financial stability and better career in future. Thus, it is not lucrative for younger ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 800, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ive for younger ones to learn how to be a efficient parent in their early ages. ...
^
Line 1, column 840, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a efficient parent in their early ages. Moreover, in schooling days adolescents ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: Regarding; With regard to
...lly affect their holistic development. In regards to be a skilled parent whether a mother or...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, may, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17013888889 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7661889334 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590277777778 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3505831037 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.3684210526 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1578947368 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05263157895 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198479946281 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651465510936 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594109118887 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123485310816 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0760273753488 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.11 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.