Some people think that the government wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view?
It is argued by some that the government investing money over arts is wastage. Instead, it can be used in other aspects. In my opinion, I agree that not all of the money spent will be a complete waste. However, I also believe that a good amount of this money can be utilized over development of basic needs such as education, infrastructure.
Money spent on Arts will not only help the country to sustain its cultural heritage, but also help to foster its cultural values to a much greater extent. In addition to that, arts will also help growth of creative mindset. As, it is often known that expressions defined by creativity lives longer. Also, it will help grow tourism and country will in turn make more money. Hence, it will be useful to help survive the art form.
Although, money can be utilized on various other sources. For instance, money spent towards education will help towards the country’s growth and showcase its stature among fellow nations, as the youth will uplift country’s economy. Moreover, money can also be spent towards building good infrastructure for citizens to provide proper amenities and livelihood. To illustrate, country spending money over infrastructure will make its citizens happier and they will be more focused in contributing towards its growth. Hence, other useful sources should not be neglected which takes more priority than arts.
In conclusion, substantial amount of money invested in arts will not be much of a waste. However, it can also be considered to invest some part towards country’s development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1318.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10852713178 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82911753295 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515503875969 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2717332629 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.375 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.125 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8125 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217055466521 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905512477342 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579419735409 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159413556363 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682446386027 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.