The given line graphs illustrates the statistics of monthly temperatures in three different nations. The table gives information about the total amount of sunshine in three separate countries.
On the whole, the highest temperatures in London and New York take place in July, while the hottest situation occurs in January in Sydney. Among all three countries observe fluctuation in the temperatures throughout a year.
Turning to detail, as can be seen from the line graph, in terms of the highest temperatures over a year, New York City has the predominant record, with nearly 30 degree in July. By the same token, the largest number of temperatures in Sydney happens in January, standing at just over 25 degree. In contrast, New York witnesses a lower degree in January, arriving at below 5 degree.
As regard to the table showed below, New York has the most amount of sunshine annually, with totally 2535 hours. On the contrary, the least number falls into London, aggregated merely 1180 hours.
- Libraries should focus on improving their technological resources rather than in building a large collection of paper books To what extend do you agree 71
- Children who grow up in families which are short of money are better prepared with the problems of adult life than children who are brought up by wealthy parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
- These days it seems that an increasing number of people are leaving rural areas to live in the city Discuss some of the effects of the rural depopulation migration from the country to the city and suggest some ways on which this trend could be reversed 71
- At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number young adults, compared with the number older people.Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages? 73
- Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of society in which they are sold.To what extend do you agree or disagree? 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, while, in contrast, on the contrary, on the whole, by the same token
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 844.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11515151515 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71343289764 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618181818182 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.4547151898 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7777777778 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184809914884 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078475059841 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446982125874 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115169222564 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487478630861 0.0819641961636 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.