In areas where there are many restaurants, some people prefer to buy their meals in restaurants very frequently, rather than cooking and eating meals at home. Other people prefer to cook most of their meals at home and only rarely eat in a restaurant. Which one would you choose and why?
First of all, food that is prepared at home leads to better health, because almost all people use the best materials such as fresh vegetables, cardia oil and fresh meat for making a nourishing meal at home. Furthermore, everyone avoids making mistakes, such as overheating oil or using unhealthy materials, while in the restaurants this happens frequently, despite the fact that there are many obligations for working at a restaurant. making food at home seems time consuming. However, by doing so, we remain healthy for more time. In other words, we can make to improve our overall health and increase our life expectancy. For instance, in the past time, our grandfathers and grandmothers had insist that they must eat their food at home, whereas nowadays people prefer to going at restaurants. The Azad University researchers show that general life expectancy become less than the past, because of changing in eating habits of people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 436, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Making
...bligations for working at a restaurant. making food at home seems time consuming. Howe...
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Line 1, column 646, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...r life expectancy. For instance, in the past time, our grandfathers and grandmothers had ...
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Line 1, column 695, Rule ID: HAD_VBP[1]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'insisted'.
Suggestion: insisted
..., our grandfathers and grandmothers had insist that they must eat their food at home, ...
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Line 1, column 695, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'insisted'.
Suggestion: insisted
..., our grandfathers and grandmothers had insist that they must eat their food at home, ...
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Line 1, column 775, Rule ID: PREFER_TO_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'go'?
Suggestion: go
...home, whereas nowadays people prefer to going at restaurants. The Azad University res...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, so, whereas, while, for instance, such as, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 15.1003584229 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 43.0788530466 28% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 52.1666666667 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 784.0 1977.66487455 40% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 153.0 407.700716846 38% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12418300654 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 4.48103885553 78% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75187461106 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 212.727598566 53% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.732026143791 0.524837075471 139% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 618.680645161 39% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.7462251377 48.9658058833 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.8571428571 5.45110844103 273% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260549864823 0.236089414692 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10295255632 0.076458572812 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0855774256673 0.0737576698707 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260549864823 0.150856017488 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 86.8835125448 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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