Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults.
Today's world is highly competitive in every aspects of life where the survival of fittest is been credo for everyone.Due to high competiton teahers,guidances and parents forces there child to be highly competitve.But dont forget that in 21st century the idea of globalization pops out where distance between countries has been diminshed and became one global country. so , i believe that the best way for society to prepare its young people is by instilling sense of cooperation rather than competiton.
For instance in business world the one of the most important trait for hiring employees skill to cooperate with there peers and work in team . This is the key decriptions of all the MNCs .Though business is highly competitve these days , no business can survive without the cooperation with other industeries.for example if one industry produced certain goods for peoples it might not be able to take his goods to people.so it has to cooperate with logistics industry to contiue there productions and make more profits.
Not only in business world we can see cooperation among nations also.For an instance one nation has limited amount of natural sources like coal,oil, but better production of foods and other nation has limited amount of food production but large amount of fossil fuels then this nation cooperates with each other to satisfy there needs.yes it is true that back in history powerful countries invaded poor country to use there resources and fought with other powerfull country for dominating poor natons. But this practice is not found in todays world because every one knows that resources are limited and the nations have to cooperate with eachother to survive .
Not only in business or political worlds but today we can see coperation of researchers also where there aim is to find something which can be useful for overall humanity. Almost all countries is part of united nation (UN). the sole purpose of this coperating organisation is betterment of humanities. I firmly believe that one should cooperate with others to ensure overall development of nation and humanity.
In sum, concluding i would like to say the best way for a society to prepare young people for any fiels is by instillling in them a sense of cooperation,not competiton.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, then, as to, for example, for instance, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1903.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 372.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11559139785 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84757720874 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537634408602 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 603.9 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 23.0359550562 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 137.033506188 60.3974514979 227% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 173.0 118.986275619 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.8181818182 23.4991977007 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 5.21951772744 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 7.80617977528 269% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0920327092844 0.243740707755 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0412525891627 0.0831039109588 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437368657846 0.0758088955206 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0564313719115 0.150359130593 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0208307586138 0.0667264976115 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 14.1392134831 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 48.8420337079 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 12.1743820225 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.01 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.8971910112 164% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 11.2143820225 136% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.7820224719 170% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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