The chart illustrates the percentage of Australian people different by gender and age group who exercise regularly in the year 2010 .
Overall ,At the age of 35 to 64 this three age group (35 to 44 ,45 to 54 and 55 to 64) were more careful about their health about 53 percents women was doing exercise regularly and women percentage of regular exercise in this data greater then men except young adult male ( age 5 to 24) .
In Australia 52.8 percent young people (age group 15 to 24) doing physical activity on regular basis and it was highest participation among male .Next two age group of male it's amount was fluctuated and reach 43.1 percentage at the age of 45 to 54 .According to increase the age of men participation rate was gradually increased and the age group of 65plus it arrive at 46.7 and it was similar at women participation at this age.
On the other hand at the age of 15 to 24 only 47.7 percent girl doing physical activity and it was lowest number of group for female .Next three age group the amount of women was gradually increased and at the age of 45 to 54 it's peak at 53.3 percentage and that was highest figure of this chart .
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. 67
- Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 61
- Ielts writing task 2 some experts belive that it is better for children to begin learning a forign language in primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outwiegh the disadvantages. 56
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 56
- Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, then, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 940.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41314553991 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50096003515 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.455399061033 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 288.9 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 22.4926829268 236% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 104.884162293 43.030603864 244% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 235.0 112.824112599 208% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.25 22.9334400587 232% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.75 5.23603664747 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 1.69756097561 1296% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318313941282 0.215688989381 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.248914880933 0.103423049105 241% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0968327299497 0.0843802449381 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248914880933 0.15604864568 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0968327299497 0.0819641961636 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.0 13.2329268293 196% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 61.2550243902 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.6 10.3012195122 210% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.19 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 23.2 10.9970731707 211% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 11.0658536585 235% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.