In this statement the author asserted that college and university education shoulf be free to all the students by the goverments' total support. I don't agree with this essay basically.Here we need to define the essence of high education is the elite education at expence while not for all the people who can or not study in. In that the total support by the government seems unrealistic to most countries in the world as by doing so, there will be chain reactions from the increasing pressure of taxpayment to the lower quality of
education which may cause more violent competetion in job-market.
With the definition of high education, this elite education should benefit the society with offering skilled people to the proper area. The university and college are not elementary education venue for all the people. The government support should make more significant influence in scietific research and help the students who need financial aid at first. If the high education is free for all the students, the poor students will get help indeed, the other place like scientific research will get less support as the total support is centain by the government. In the future, due to the lower scietific reasearch will decrease the quality of education in that the support to the college and university is declining.
Moreover, The financial support from the government is collected by the taxpayers' contribution. If the government offer college and university free of charge, the pressure will transfer to the taxpayers of the society which will bring about other troubles like the anger from people who recongnize this support as an abuse of power which benefit some people at the expence of other people's benefit in the same society.
Another reason is that the free tuition fee will make students more easier to get high education which means there will be more graduates from high education institution.In the end, the students who leaving school with degrees look for job will be harder and harder becasuse there are more peers in the same job-market every year. With this competetion's escalating, there will be students who get jobs with low pays and who fail to with anger due to the competition caused by free tuition fee. I believe this is not the result of what we want in high education.
In conclusion, I think free tuition fee by the support of the governmrnt to all the college an university students may cause various of trouble as what we did not anticipate. The government should make specific plans to help poor students and allege the whole society to focus the education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, may, moreover, so, while, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 33.0 12.9106741573 256% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2169.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 436.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9747706422 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66607600054 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.405963302752 0.4932671777 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 674.1 704.065955056 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.8808206314 60.3974514979 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.6 118.986275619 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0666666667 23.4991977007 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.21951772744 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191122478442 0.243740707755 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079977656856 0.0831039109588 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418749301939 0.0758088955206 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11287334818 0.150359130593 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285617969541 0.0667264976115 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 14.1392134831 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.8971910112 164% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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