Economic growth in recent years made some people in both developed countries and developing countries richer. However research showing that while people in developing countries are happier , people in developed countries seems no happier than before. Why ? What can we learn from this ?
It is a fact that the growth in economy in recent years made some people in both advancing countries and advanced countries richer. It is proved that people in developing are more satisfied while people in developed countries are less happy than before. I will list several reasons which contributed to this problem in this essay below.
Research showed that citizens in developing nations are more delighted these days. In the past, they had a hard life. They didn’t have enough money to fulfill all their needs like food and clothes, etc. Nowadays, since the economy has grown up, their life standards improved as well. They could get what they need without thinking too much about money and they don’t have to be worried about being starved either. Furthermore, many ways of entertainment are possible for them to afford now and It also lead to the enhancing in their happiness.
On the contrary, those who live in advanced nations are being more negative. They have always been wealthy so they had no worries about starvation or debts and bills. They don’t really appreciate the life they have and that is the key factor which resulted in their negative mood.
In conclusion , money can’t buy happiness, people should adjust their mindsets and be happy for what they have.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, really, so, well, while, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1088.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 217.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01382488479 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46545017702 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635944700461 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.9742062089 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.6923076923 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6923076923 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215261033389 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0851421233887 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.16023903809 0.0667982634062 240% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152687790357 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.208664953316 0.056905535591 367% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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