Regarding population growth, nowadays governments have encountered a considerable chunk of functional aspects in order to provide the welfare facilities for an extensive rate of people living in a certain region. One of these aspects is the concern to the facilitation of traveling, which demands of significance budget and also must meet standard infrastructure in order to ensure the travelers’ security and health.
Travel has been considering as a crucial segment of modern life which has made people obsessive to choose the most suitable type. On the one hand, governments are in charge of providing the various kind of safe and reasonable transportation methods for instance in air, sea and land transport including rail, road and so on. On the other hand, they are accountable to control all kind of them constantly and equipping them regularly to the latest technology.
In my opinion, the most sophisticated part of transportation planning has lain on the roads. The other kinds, however, are substantial but at a glance to the roads, we can simply realize that there are a variety of vehicles ranging from bicycles and private cars to the busses and trucks on roads. Likewise, statistical analysis has unfortunately shown that the streets and highways have been taking the most victims annually. Albeit, the government need to allocate the sufficient financial resources to all segments of transportation, roads are seemed vital.
In addition, a vast majority of people takes short journeys every day and it’s the most common type of daily travels. Meanwhile, there is an obvious tendency to use private cars for long domestic journeys. Since they are more convenient and it's feasible to make a decision without any restriction about the time and place. To sum up, I should say while governments need to contribute to all parts of the transportation foundation, but roads are needed the most level of investment.
- Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 11
- Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their wast 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, likewise, regarding, so, while, for instance, in addition, kind of, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1627.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23151125402 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07192953492 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614147909968 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0011270629 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.153846154 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9230769231 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3846153846 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0577272575682 0.244688304435 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0187608985787 0.084324248473 22% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0221006512694 0.0667982634062 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0332193751455 0.151304729494 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0198789824087 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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