More and more people are now considering wearing fashionable clothes very important. Is it positive or negative?
Fashion nowadays becoming an essence of modern society. It is evident from the fact in this modern era more and more people consider wearing fashionable clothes a trend. In the below paragraphs I will discuss both the positive and negative aspects of this contentious argument however I believe wearing fashionable clothes represents a positive personality.
First and foremost there are a plethora of positive effects the most preponderant one being the fact that since many people wear fashionable clothes it gives them desirable confidence and a feel-good factor while they are in office, attending birthday parties, meeting a prominent person or some award function. Secondly, if a person wears trendy clothes he always gets the desired confidence to qualify for some important interviews. Thirdly in this era of entrepreneurship, many people experiment with new trendy and fashionable clothes in order to check the response from the general public as based on that they launch their own clothing line.
On the other hand, fashion is only considered for a wealthier section of society as the brands they wear can’t be afforded by the weaker sections of the society thus bringing huge parity. As these branded fashionable products are endorsed by celebrities and since these celebrities have a huge fan following. Due to this, some people are allured with these marketing campaigns of these luxurious items and thus end up in huge financial debt trying to afford all these fashionable items.
Thus, in my opinion, wearing fashionable and trendier clothes is a positive thing due to the above-mentioned reasons but it should not become an obsession and thus result in a financial burden.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 580, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...in order to check the response from the general public as based on that they launch their own ...
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Line 5, column 493, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to afford all these fashionable items. Thus, in my opinion, wearing fashionable...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, while, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29520295203 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88904675303 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590405904059 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.5143593519 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.5 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331859472724 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132493783326 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112208389637 0.0667982634062 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200617613812 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127864307039 0.056905535591 225% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.