Economic growth and development are usually considered to be beneficial both for individuals and for society as a whole.
Do the advantages of economic development outweigh the disadvantages?
In recent years, economics growth and development of technology are changing our daily lives. It could be assumed that these factors have been bringing to us lots of advantages and beneficial aspects. However, it also has potential drawbacks to our lives as well.
On the one hand, thanks to these developments, the personal life and the society become more and more comfortable and convenient. Firstly, economic growth upgrades our basic lives by allowing us to gain the salary rate higher, buying well-qualified products with the reasonable price, etc. Secondly, technology development has changed the society in the positive way. In fact, people can watch the latest movies or TV program which they missed by accessing to the internet. Additionally, we can order food, book a taxi, seeking the materials for free, etc. just by a click of a mouse. Last but not least, the development helps us to overcome the geographic obstacles in communicating with our acquaintances and relations.
Every penny has two sides; however, the economic growth and development have caused countless serious issues for years. The environment is being destroyed day by day because of these factors. There are too much exhaust fume and toxic gases which are emitted from factories and vehicles. That is the reason explain why our Earth has suffered the Greenhouse effect and global warming for recent years. Furthermore, due to economic growth, the natural resources will be completely depleted one day and the amount of oxygen in the air is being threaten because of deforestation.
In conclusion, although there are some benefits which the economic growth offer to us, these mentioned factors also harm to our daily lives and the society by many serious drawbacks which we need to find the best solution to deal with.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18088737201 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78453118199 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597269624573 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6900392509 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.875 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3125 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249276614447 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725785344716 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661826303408 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1477166357 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460595956158 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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