More and more people are now considering wearing fashionable clothes very important. Is it positive or negative?
Fashion has become an important part of people lives. A great number of youngsters are very conscious about wearing stylish clothes. I believe this trend is more harmful than beneficial impact. The following essay discuss negative effects on society before reaching any conclusion.
Owing to the increased branded shops in the modern era a good measure of people shop for the trendy clothes. Their impulsive nature has made them to squander their hard-earned money on buying costly apparel .Moreover they judged everyone with the same eyes that could be result of inferiority complex among others.lastly there is a showbiz business as status symbol
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
lastly, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 10.4138276553 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 41.998997996 31% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 549.0 1615.20841683 34% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 103.0 315.596192385 33% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33009708738 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.18573250055 4.20363070211 76% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59061438138 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 176.041082164 49% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.844660194175 0.561755894193 150% => OK
syllable_count: 171.0 506.74238477 34% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 69.0058371122 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1666666667 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14418912159 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668400316248 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042408532537 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112771940752 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0929934228494 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.31 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 78.4519038076 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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