Men are naturally better than women at certain kinds of job.
To what extend do you agree or disagree?
The estimate age of mankind counts more than 100000 years and throughout all this period men and women lived together, but have developed different key abilities that make one or another stronger in certain activities. I would completely agree with this idea, although there are some exceptions. In this essay I would describe main reasons why this is so.
To begin with, let think first of all that men and women differs physically as a rule in our species. Grown men are usually taller, weight more and are stronger. this creates strong advantages in many daily jobs, from running, jumping, pulling. Thought history men adopted these abilities in different creative tasks like hunting, space orientation, sailing. Let’s not forget the involvement in history by starting and creating wars and physical concurrence that deed to be proved by males.
Another heavy argument is that is medically proven that brain of mascules works differently from women. Specific regions of brain are more developed and this explains why in many jobs nowadays we would see men more likely. many inventor, architects, designers are known from the beginning of time and almost all of them are men. Needless to say that present day jobs are more equally spread for boths, but many would say that a men chef or driver is better anyway than many women.
To sum up, it is evident that physical and mental differences leaded men to be more advantageous and better, but there are exceptions anyway bearing in mind the number of population the Earth has. My prediction is that this situation will not change in near future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: 'man' is the singular form of 'men'. Consider using 'man'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, first, if, so, first of all, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02611940299 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52797612489 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619402985075 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6034618141 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2142857143 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1428571429 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144280943788 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0469270082492 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411029507881 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0841399996887 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315976798578 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.