Amusement parks and playgrounds play an instrumental role in our lives, especially those living in towns and cities.But whether it is necessary or not to have such park in every city or town is a question being raised by many. Albeit, being a part of town i reckon that such public spots do well for citizens because civilians have no choice to rejuvenate except for such parks.
One the one side, as we all heedful regarding lifestyle of citizens and in order to amuse themselves on regular basis parks could be fruitful to them. For example cities are dotted with buildings, so people cannot find open space to play and on the top of that childrens are bound to play indoor games which is, not to mention, deleterious in one way or another. But if they would provided with playground along with parks then lifestyle could be rectified.
Secondly, residents of towns or cities experience hectic schedule on diurnal basis and having spots for refreshing themselves could obviate the monotony of their brains. Because in homes they cannot inhale fresh air which is imperative to have agile and Hale and hearty life.
Apart from that, with a view to getting riddance of technology based lifestyle, in particular for childrens, or to instill in children a sense of importance pertinent to real games, aforementioned spots immensely handy. And one more important point for elders who considered themselves lone can spend precious time with fellows.
On the other side, no doubt there are also flaws in having these places. First, for example, childrens may get addicted to parks which means less time to study. And in small cities there are number of projects which are supposed to be done (better schools, college, health amenities, and etcetera) before constructing parks. And parks are meant to be preserved obligingly which cost thousands and every city may not be able to shoulder such expanses.
In compendium, no matter if building parks or whatever also consists limitations but these places are a must if everyone desire to live better life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 117, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...cially those living in towns and cities.But whether it is necessary or not to have ...
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Line 1, column 257, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...d by many. Albeit, being a part of town i reckon that such public spots do well f...
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Line 3, column 382, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'provide'
Suggestion: provide
...n one way or another. But if they would provided with playground along with parks then l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, then, well, apart from, except for, for example, i reckon, in particular, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1716.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98837209302 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60496260596 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598837209302 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7769050176 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.571428571 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5714285714 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6428571429 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258238743825 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834665751194 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528608772164 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120638006958 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694250845107 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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