You recently took a plane to a holiday in a foreign city, and on arrival, you found that your luggage was lost. . Write to the airline:
explain the situation.
describe the luggage
suggest to airline what to do
Dear Sir,
Hope you are doing well. I am writing in reference to inform you that my luggage has been lost while in transit. To elucidate the situation, the incident happened when I was travelling from Bangkok to Singapore via Thia Airlines flight number TG 412 last Thursday and had checked in my suitcase while boarding the flight at the Survumbhumi Aiport. Though the suitcase had been checked in at the Bangkok airport on arrival at Singapore International airport I was not able to trace my luggage.
The suitcase was dark grey in colour and was covered with travel stickers. For me, the suitcase is important as it contains some critical official documents apart from this it also has some personal documents like my driving license and cash of one thousand dollars. it also has an emotional significance as it always reminds me of the destinations I travelled in the past.
Hence I request you to inquire into this matter and contact me immediately in case the authorities are able to find the suitcase and send it to my mailing address. I would appreciate an immediate response from your side.
Yours sincerely
brian
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, Hope you are doing well. I am writing in...
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Line 2, column 349, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...g the flight at the Survumbhumi Aiport. Though the suitcase had been checked in at the...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 268, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...cense and cash of one thousand dollars. it also has an emotional significance as i...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...estinations I travelled in the past. Hence I request you to inquire into this matt...
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Line 8, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...onse from your side. Yours sincerely brian
^^^
Line 9, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...m your side. Yours sincerely brian
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, well, while, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 945.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89637305699 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70914602792 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621761658031 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.094175235 44.8134815571 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 4.34317383033 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136184356259 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061969905558 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556116371105 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.077757900379 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497709970574 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.