Television has two roles to inform and to entertain. Explain which of these roles you see as more important. To what extent do you think that TV today performs each of these roles in an effective way? Support your point view with details from your own experience, observation or reading.
The importance of television which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that while other reject this notion. The substantial influence of reasons has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of trend on recent year. In my opinion the former latter appears to be more rational. this essay will further elaborate the positive effect of the above trend and thus will lead to be a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reasons which will further explain the argument but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that it is great source of information. Consequently it act as stress-buster. For instance we can get information of all across the world by sitting at our dwelling place. Another aspect of this argument is that we can gain teaching of cooking classes. Needless to say all these merits stand in a good stead.
elaborating my viewpoint, this trend has some more merits but one of the crucial effect is that it is a good way of entertainment. As a result we can watch plethora of shows and programs. For illustration, one of the famous show The kapil sharma show.
Hence it is apparent why many are in favor of television.
According to the argument aforementioned above one can reach a conclusion that the benefits of television are instrumental indeed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, hence, so, thus, well, while, for instance, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1113.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 223.0 242.827586207 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99103139013 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91601906133 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605381165919 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 379.143842365 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.6169044089 50.4703680194 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5 104.977214359 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9285714286 20.9669160288 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.33497536946 169% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.080013144482 0.242375264174 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0236554296505 0.0925447433944 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0257555694811 0.071462118173 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.035009953205 0.151781067708 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0223826289905 0.0609392437508 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 12.6369458128 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 53.1260098522 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.9458128079 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 56.5 Out of 90
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