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Dear sir/Madam,
I heard the news that the city council is planning to pull down. As everybody knows museum building is the trademark of our city. there are a lot of visitors come to visit the city to see the museum building. it is one the main structure in our country. The city is famous only because of this. So the major people think it should maintain to keep the city well known.
Since there are a lot of visitors are coming to see this building, we have to renovate it. Outside this structure, there is a park which our children usually plays in the evening. All our families come to this place and they make a beautiful moment from there. They share their old memories from there only. we do not have any other option other than this museum to share our thoughts between the families.
we can find out a fund to renovate this by a small ticket price for the visitors. Also, we can request out state government a small budget every year for this. other than this we can make monthly pass visit card for the families who all stay near this.
In our all, instead of pull down the building, we need to find out a solution for the funds. Please do the needful and take this letter as a whole people request.
Thanks,
Binoj
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir/Madam, I heard the news that the city council i...
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Line 3, column 66, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... city council is planning to pull down. As everybody knows museum building is the ...
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Line 3, column 131, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
... building is the trademark of our city. there are a lot of visitors come to visit the...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...it the city to see the museum building. it is one the main structure in our countr...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...are their old memories from there only. we do not have any other option other than...
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Suggestion: We
...re our thoughts between the families. we can find out a fund to renovate this by...
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Suggestion: Other
...ent a small budget every year for this. other than this we can make monthly pass visi...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r as a whole people request. Thanks, Binoj
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1010.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 230.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39130434783 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13201361196 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55652173913 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 310.5 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.6684676742 44.8134815571 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 63.125 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.375 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.125 4.34317383033 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.216113520407 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0766984524023 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.12726935374 0% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0580467560999 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.59 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.53 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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