Hydo-electric power plan process
The picture illustrates how to generate electricity from hydro-power. In general, this process consists of two main processes which are divided by several kinds of detail process. The first main process is natural process while the other one is mechanical process.
Natural process is divided into two processes, called evaporation and rain process. It begins with heating seawater by the sun which evaporates into cloud. The blown cloud moves across mountain then rain is happening. Due to accumulation of wet cloud, rain water which falls to the surface is accumulated on the earth, named reservoir, which is connected to dam.
Coming immediately after accumulating in reservoir, mechanical process begins. When the valve of dam is opened, water that passes through pipe, flows to turbine resulting electricity. Water from turbine is flowed back to reservoir by pump. After resulting electricity, electric current then transfers to the transformer station by high voltage cables. By using underground cable, accumulated current in the station then distributes to costumers. They are Households, factory, Hospitals and Schools
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