the diagram below shows the process off using water to produce electricity.summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

Presented diagram illustrates utilisation of water for the production of electricity as well as associated natural processes.

To begin with, evaporated seawater caused by heating effect of sunlight is condensed into clouds and subsequently results in rain, which is stored in specially designed reservoir. Water collected there is also restrained by a valve controlling its flow. Then, turbine generates electricity when the water passes through it in case the valve is opened. Employed water proceeds to special facility to be pumped back to reservoir.

Produced electricity then is transferr...

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