You cannot go to a company where you got an offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor to
1- Explain the reason why you decline the offer
2- Express your gratitude
3- Explain you like your current job very much
Dear Sir,
I am thrilled to receive this offer from your esteemed organisation. It is indeed a great offer as well as the job. I was looking for the same job and the responsibilities to enhance my career. However, I will not be able to accept the same. To elucidate, I am being promoted in my present company with the same package and the job responsibilities. Apart from this, I will be handling the whole Asia-Pacific region which will help me in exploring the overseas opportunities as well.
Your company and its achievements are known for decades and it was the happiest day when I received the offer. But, I will not be able to honour your offer. I would like to thank your entire recruitment team and express my deepest apology too especially to the interviewer.
Currently, I am leading some really important ongoing projects in my present organisation and want to perform commendably so the entire team and the company should take pride in me.
I look forward to working with you and hoping to get an acknowledgement.
Yours faithfully,
Ben
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, really, so, well, apart from, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 876.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7868852459 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07435210041 2.54303337028 121% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612021857923 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1800976531 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.0 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.25 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 4.34317383033 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159158614094 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617566843076 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426418578858 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0927111920381 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547994480308 0.0580467560999 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.91 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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