Dear Sara,
Thank you very much for inviting me to your 21st birthday party. I will come along as we did not catch up recently. Well, we really need to do something special to celebrate such a big event.
As I had such a party last week, I have some suggestions to make it more remarkable. It is better to invite your close friends with a DJ and it would be thoroughly enjoyable if you invite a singer to the party. To make it even extraordinary, we could have a themed party. Maybe everyone could dress up as any famous characters from Hollywood films. There could be a prize, too, for the best-dressed guest.
I think our party will be more interesting if we arrange it from 5 pm to 9 pm as well, you like night parties. Additionally, we can organize some games or activities for entertainment. Furthermore, it will be better if our party is in any remote area, so we do not need to worry about the noise level.
I hope my suggestion would help you to organize your party well.
Best wishes
Adam
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...birthday party. I will come along as we didnt catch up recently. Well, we really need...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... our party is in any remote area, so we dont need to worry about the noise level. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, moreover, really, so, well, i think, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 792.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35164835165 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46871500944 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620879120879 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.7170829344 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.9230769231 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69230769231 4.34317383033 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169554629881 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554692577213 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517730197414 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101021606883 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426844224625 0.0580467560999 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.36 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.85 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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