Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful. What is your opinion?

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Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful. What is your opinion?

It is not an overstatement to claim that computers play a great role in our everyday lives. Nowadays, you can see the presence of computers in every aspects of daily life, communication, education system and so on; they become gradually an inveitable part of life. Although many people believe that computers and technology bring stress and complexity in our lives, in my openion computers made our life much easier and they cost less than their benefits. There are two persuasive arguments on support of aforementioned statement discussing it from different concievable angles.

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Sentence: Nowadays, you can see the presence of computers in every aspects of daily life, communication, education system and so on; they become gradually an inveitable part of life.
Error: inveitable Suggestion: inevitable

Sentence: Although many people believe that computers and technology bring stress and complexity in our lives, in my openion computers made our life much easier and they cost less than their benefits.
Error: openion Suggestion: opinion

Sentence: There are two persuasive arguments on support of aforementioned statement discussing it from different concievable angles.
Error: concievable Suggestion: conceivable

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