Television is dangerous because it destroys family life and any sense of community, instead of visiting eople or talking with our family we just watched television. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is undeniable that watching television in an easier way to refresh from routines than visiting people or talking with our family. However, I believe that television causes problem to family life and any sense of community.
Hectic situation in big city makes a stressful impact to citizens which need to be prevented. Recreation becomes a valuable activity for residents on the weekend after doing a lot of activities which makes people prefer to do simple activity just for refreshing their body. One of simple activities for national who lives in the main city is watching television. It is more effective than visiting people because they do not have to take too much effort for moving and managing the time. Sometimes, businessmen face difficulty to have a chatting with their family because they have different agendas.
On the other hands, public should be aware that television is harmful in some reasons. Television can make marriage life not in harmony condition because partners prefer to have an individual time by enjoying news or movie which is triggering a conflict. Watching TV can reduce intensity of gathering among family members which need to build bounding between parents and children. Another effect happens to children who need more love and concerning from the parents. Overuse of television makes children lack sense of society because children frequently just sit down enjoying cartoon than meet friends while making fun game to make them happy and free. It is not rare, individual activity with high frequency can trigger autistic disorder among children and disturb their development.
Taking more concern to filter TV program and managing the time in watching TV can be early step to prevent negative effect of TV. Certainly, it needs a serious effort to realize regarding a lot of people who have not understood about the effect.
In conclusion, it is true that enjoying TV program is the simple way for people who stay in the big city, but I believe that people still need to make social life by visiting others or chatting with their relatives.
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