A university education is the key to getting a good job. For that reason, the government should provide enough money to the universities so everyone can get a degree for free. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from you own knowledge or experience.
As a student, I have my lesson that I need to put effort in order to achieve my goal. Going to university, getting a good job and contributing to society are everyone dreams. In my opinion, in order to achieve a degree, it would be better to have some extra support from the government.
Firstly, I am a foreigner, I came to Canada to gain a better achievement and getting a good job to having a better life. Because of that reason, education is an important step I need to pass. Not like many others, I do not have many privileges as many other Canadians, there are language barriers, financial issues, and many other problems need to deal with. To achieve my goal which is getting a good job, a better life. If the government help to achieve my goal that would have been fantastic, and also will help contribute more to the society.
Secondly, as much as many other people have their own conditional and their own problems in everyday life, many people would try to achieve their goal without fear facing the challenge. Government could be helpful but they cannot help everyone. As much of the population raised everyday, I think every individual should take responsibility for contributing to the cost of a university education in order to help society growth more. For example, there are many families having bad conditional and cannot afford their own goods, which means the government can step in and help them out. if they have some extra funds in their pocket ,this will help more families have the opportunity to contribute to society.
Although, I agree with every individual should take responsibility for the cost of a university education. But beyond that , if university fees is free, it would help to grow society as a community and help it become a better place.
- You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.The graph below shows the total value of exports and the value of fuel, food and manufactured goods exported by one country from 2000 to 2005.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feat 67
- A university education is the key to getting a good job. For that reason, the government should provide enough money to the universities so everyone can get a degree for free. To what extent do you agree or disagree?Give reasons for your answer and includ 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76205787781 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72597990995 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.463022508039 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.026324671 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7333333333 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86666666667 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153416681932 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064184598963 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595416709025 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102941448391 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395936892911 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.