In these days media plays a major role in people's lives by spreading the news throughout the world. Effects of news media cause a controversy which has two sides of view, both negative and positive. I find it more justified to assert that news media have a positive impact on society.
On the one hand, critics believe news media distort our lives. This notion comes from the negative effects of media such as changing our ideas and the way we are thinking. As an example could be provided by mentioning the way of advertising in news. Some issues are spread for propaganda purposes and news emphasizes one part of the situation. In this way, news not only gains its purposes but also changes people's mind. Furthermore, it is accepted that what we hear and see affects on our lives. So, news media by broadcasting terrible news such as crisis, inflation and so forth cause hopeless in society. These negative point of view have influenced our lives by hopeless and changing our mind, however people can decide to follow good news and do some researches about what they hear or read.
Conversely, some people firmly hold that news media have influenced people's lives in positive ways. One rational explanation of this view is news makes people aware of what is happening around the world. To be more precise, news media provides general information and knowledge which make people aware of everything they tend to know such economic, politics, sports and technology. These knowledge help us make a correct decision in a hard situation as if we faced it several times.
In conclusion, some news spread for propaganda purposes and maybe cause hopeless. However, general information and knowledge can help people make the right decision in their lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 173, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... our ideas and the way we are thinking. As an example could be provided by mention...
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Line 5, column 383, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this knowledge' or 'These knowledges'?
Suggestion: This knowledge; These knowledges
...nomic, politics, sports and technology. These knowledge help us make a correct decision in a ha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, furthermore, however, if, may, so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93918918919 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54351285299 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530405405405 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1901788199 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4117647059 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.70588235294 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320041645043 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110191376867 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0961481207979 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210714597726 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0823667179472 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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