The diagram below show how leather goods are produced. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the production cycle of leather goods.
Overall, making leather goods is a complex process in which chemical substances and machines are used. There are 10 stages of manufacturing starting from animal skin drying to producing final products.
At the beginning raw animal skin is dried via open air and sun, then cars transport it to the factory. The delivery phase is followed by discharging of product and preparation for washing stage, at which animal skin is placed in mixture of water and lime. After material was cleaned it is transferred to tank with lime liquid in order to be soaked. Next, semi finished leather should be flattened, it is done by rolls of flattening machine.
Consecutive stage involves additional soaking of skin in special mixture called tannin, which contains water and vegetable matter. After that step, leather is polished and charged in truck in order to be delivered to the second factory. Finally, different goods such as shoes, balls or bags are produced from leather and could be sold in special shops.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 54, Rule ID: COMMA_THAN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'then'?
Suggestion: then
... raw animal skin is dried via open air, than it is transported to the factory by the...
^^^^
Line 4, column 257, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...is placed in mixture of water and lime. After material was cleaned it is transfered t...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, second, so, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 822.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01219512195 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62911669774 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640243902439 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.4954014329 43.030603864 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.3333333333 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2222222222 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0663829644171 0.215688989381 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.032596601733 0.103423049105 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365740261274 0.0843802449381 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0548887876671 0.15604864568 35% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365849905147 0.0819641961636 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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