It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city.
Do you agree or disagree?
Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay.
Although, some people believe that children who grow up in a village or a town are superior as compared to kids growing up in big cities while few people counter this agreement. A part of a population still thinks that the bigger cities have a better lifestyle for children.
As per my opinion, it is always favorable for a child to grow up in the countryside due to certain reasons which I have explained further. To begin with, children usually remain attached to their roots during their childhood which will eventually help them in their future. On the same note, this attachment might help them to become a respectable person in society. Furthermore, there are small sized communities in towns and kids have more chance to be familiar with their friends which will eventually help them to achieve a better social life.
Also, the most significant drawbacks of growing up in the city are that the kids can be exposed to its lavish lifestyle. As a result of this, they might end up involved in certain crimes or situation for money which could land them in trouble. Similarly, the crime rate in cities is significantly higher than villages or towns which can impact these children at their young age. On the other hand, the cities might have better resources for education and career.
Thus, with above in mind, we can safely conclude that the kids growing up in the countryside will be strongly connected to their roots with better socialization. In addition, the lifestyle and living standard of cities might prove to be a detriment to the lives of these kids.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 108, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'kid'.
Suggestion: kid
...e or a town are superior as compared to kids growing up in big cities while few peop...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, similarly, so, still, thus, while, in addition, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1304.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81180811808 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59459717066 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549815498155 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.2603288151 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.666666667 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5833333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173368917921 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688912188297 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509747516341 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115110662367 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412457126819 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.