You are taking a holiday in a place recommended by your local travel agent and you are having a wonderful time. You promise to write to him and let him know what you think of his suggestion. Write a letter to your travel agent as promised and let him know what you have been doing and what you are going to do before the end of the journey.
Dear Mark,
Hope this letter finds you in the pink of your health. I wanted to write back to let you know the latest updates of our vacation in Bali additionally I also wanted to thank you for recommending such a great place.
To elucidate I can say that it is one of the best tourist destinations due to the fact that it covers the various facets of Balinese culture additionally we went to some famous temples, explored local markets for shopping and nearby exquisite beaches. As suggested by you we went to Mount Batur and explored the places around like the Jimbaran waterfalls. From the alfresco part of a local restaurant located at the hilltop, we could see the panoramic view of the lush green valley on one side and the mesmerizing view of the lake on the other side.
As my vacation comes to end next week I will travel to Lombok Island, it is about two hours boat ride from the Bali harbour. I got to know from local people that it has an active volcano and mesmerizing beaches which are a centre of attraction.
I look forward to seeing you soon in Sydney.
Warm wishes
Ben
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mark, Hope this letter finds you in the pink o...
^^^
Line 9, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...seeing you soon in Sydney. Warm wishes Ben
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 901.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.505 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47608057219 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.4679960063 44.8134815571 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.111111111 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2222222222 16.8248392259 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218647207283 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817216237121 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788031752882 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133250393248 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104335910826 0.0580467560999 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.