In today's world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.
Although today's world pays more attention to the accomplishment quickly, doing accurately is still important. From my viewpoint it depends on the sort of the job. Some jobs need to be done as fast as possible, on contrary, for some job we must be careful about the lots of details. There are some works which need more attention because of being so sensitive. In fact, a small mistake or blunder might cause indispensable costs and serious dangers. For example, in the university, I remember the head of the collage was very vigilant at work. When she wanted to start research on specific subject with a student as her or his supervisor teacher, she was so slowly to find a good method of research. She believes that hurry and being hasty cause that we take a wrong way. I could learn numerous things from her and I also could get decent results from cooperating with her while doing slowly. In addition, some works really need to be done with patience and accuracy like the work as to experiments. Those works with the smallest flaw can spoil the whole of effort and attempt. Therefore, we should be more observant of some work even in the modern life with majestic technology.
Speed can be a principal factor in performing some work. There are enormous works that need to be accomplished quickly. In the other words, doing on time with high quantity is more vital than doing with high quality. We can realize tremendous careers in our surroundings like work related to productive factories. These factories aim at the high production in less time so that making mistakes is usual and natural for them. Today, human with technologies like computers and invention of various machines has been able to get work run faster than before. For instance, car companies are using robots for doing and handling heavy materials that it had been done by hand before. We can mention that most of the new invention of the modern life is because of saving time. As a result, now, speed for human has so valuable that they are always estimating the time of everything. The high speed for some people means having more time, doing more stuff and so, making more money.
I personally think that doing quickly depends on the kind of work. I as an architect must be watchful. There are also lots of works that the speed is in high level for them.
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