University should accept equal numbers of male and female student in every subject.
To what extend do you agree or disagree.
it is undeniable fact that today people can watching movies, play games anywhere due to advancement of technology such as a mobile phones, laptops, computers and tablets. Just every single coin has a flip side equivalently modern technologies has the positive as well as negative brunt on human life. I would explain the pros and cons of latest gadgets in following paragraphs.
New technology devices like mobile and laptop has myriad merits. Firstly, it is fact that it is great source of entertainment for people as well as childrens.There are plethora of games who attract the people such as a pubg game and best way to do during leisure time.people learn so many thing in laptops and computer such as a ms office which is definitely help them to build a strong resume and get a good job in future. Moreover, many movies and games come with the moral lesson so crowd encourage by the message and do something good toward society and themself.
However, no one can Denny the demerits of digital entertainment device. First and main one is that people vanish their important time. In other word, people find it more interesting and they spend more time in front of tv and gaming console. Furthermore, films comes with vulgarity, violence which influence people towards it. this types of act create negative effect on society. Additionally, this types gadget create serious eye problems because human eye does not able to consume blue ray radiation from screen. As results people have to wear glasses for good visibility.
In conclusion,the positive and flip side of computer and mobile phone depend upon how human think about it and execute it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the latest'.
Suggestion: of the latest
...life. I would explain the pros and cons of latest gadgets in following paragraphs. Ne...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...atest gadgets in following paragraphs. New technology devices like mobile and l...
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Suggestion: helped
...such as a ms office which is definitely help them to build a strong resume and get a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94244604317 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68885794373 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643884892086 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.804932261 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1428571429 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0197169305682 0.244688304435 8% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00566960893053 0.084324248473 7% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0113139238859 0.0667982634062 17% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0111824091536 0.151304729494 7% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0114489836805 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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