states that R. robustus could not activtly hunt the dinosaur in its stomach for three reasons
The reading states that R. robustus could not activtly hunt the dinosaur in its stomach for three reasons. However, the proThe reading states that R. robustus could not activtly hunt the dinosaur in its stomach for three reasons. However, the professor asserts that it is quite possible for R. robustus to hunt actively baby dinosaurs. She refutes each reason in the reading as follows.
First, the passage states that R. robustus was too small to hunt actively the psittacosaurs dinosaur in its stomach. On the other hand, Professor believes that although R. robustus was small, but its mass was twice bigger than a baby dinosaur. As a result R. robustus could easily hunt actively baby dinosaurs.
Second, the passage states that R. robustus was a short legged animal. The professor opposes this point by mentioning an example of an actively hunter animal with short leggs positioned to the side which could run fifteen kilometers an hour. So she believes that R. robustus could also run fast enough to hunt actively.
Third, the passage mentions that the psittacosaurs dinosaur found in R. robustus ' stomach did not have any teeth mark on the bones. The professor oppeses this idea by explaining that it could sollow the prey whole or in big pieces.
fessor asserts that it is quite possible for R. robustus to hunt actively baby dinosaurs. She refutes each reason in the reading as follows.
First, the passage states that R. robustus was too small to hunt actively the psittacosaurs dinosaur in its stomach. On the other hand, Professor believes that although R. robustus was small, but its mass was twice bigger than a baby dinosaur. As a result R. robustus could easily hunt actively baby dinosaurs.
Second, the passage states that R. robustus was a short legged animal. The professor opposes this point by mentioning an example of an actively hunter animal with short leggs positioned to the side which could run fifteen kilometers an hour. So she believes that R. robustus could also run fast enough to hunt actively.
Third, the passage mentions that the psittacosaurs dinosaur found in R. robustus ' stomach did not have any teeth mark on the bones. The professor oppeses this idea by explaining that it could sollow the prey whole or in big pieces.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... was twice bigger than a baby dinosaur. As a result R. robustus could easily hunt ...
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...it could sollow the prey whole or in big pieces.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, third, as to, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 5.04856512141 198% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 18.0 12.0772626932 149% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 22.412803532 152% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 30.3222958057 99% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.01324503311 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1900.0 1373.03311258 138% => OK
No of words: 380.0 270.72406181 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.04702891845 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48571542286 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 145.348785872 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.273684210526 0.540411800872 51% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 567.0 419.366225166 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 13.0 8.23620309051 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 38.0 13.0662251656 291% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 10.0 21.2450331126 47% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7702027355 49.2860985944 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 50.0 110.228320801 45% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.0 21.698381199 46% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.28947368421 7.06452816374 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.09492273731 195% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 4.19205298013 453% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 4.33554083885 277% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 26.0 4.27373068433 608% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.487691096066 0.272083759551 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134499077139 0.0996497079465 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.165677009818 0.0662205650399 250% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256847955728 0.162205337803 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.175155829146 0.0443174109184 395% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 13.3589403974 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.79 53.8541721854 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.0289183223 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.24 12.2367328918 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.75 8.42419426049 68% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 63.6247240618 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 3.5 10.7273730684 33% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.498013245 57% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 6.0 11.2008830022 54% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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