Like to live with family or independent. Agree or disagree
According to the my opinion , I really prefer to live with my family for a longer time.I like to live in family rather than live independent. A family is very secure palce for me. A family is very good sources of learn and experience new things. Let see it how live in the family provide you more benefit than live independent.
Everybody has lot of work in daily routine life. Nobody has time to listen your problems. Everybody are very busy in their work not even your close friend . Then to share your problems and tension you need somebody to listen you. A such person who care for you , who releve your tension and who provide the solution to your problems. For that the only place is available in the world is nothing but your family. Whenever you feel nervous that time your parent come forward and to make you happy. Without them you can't get out this. So to share all things I must need a family. For example , when I fail to pass my first interview that time I was so depressed.In that situation my parent help me . They motivate me to prepare it again. So at end my family help me in this case.
Secondly,every adults after marriage keep their in baby seater. They don't like to keep their children with their parent.This is totally wrong.
Now a day you can't belive no anybody except your parents.Parents are only the good source to gurd your children.They can understand our problem.
So because of these reasons I like to prefer to live with my family .
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Sentence: A family is very good sources of learn and experience new things.
Description: The token of is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to of and learn
Sentence: Let see it how live in the family provide you more benefit than live independent.
Description: The fragment how live in is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace live with verb, past participle
Description: The fragment family provide you is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace provide with verb, past tense
Sentence: Everybody are very busy in their work not even your close friend .
Description: A pronoun, nominal is not usually followed by a verb 'to be', present tense, 2nd person singular or all
Suggestion: Refer to Everybody and are
In that situation my parent help me .
In that situation my parents help me .
So at end my family help me in this case.
So at end my family helped me in this case.
Sentence: A such person who care for you , who releve your tension and who provide the solution to your problems.
Error: releve Suggestion: relieve
Sentence: Secondly,every adults after marriage keep their in baby seater.
Error: seater Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Now a day you can't belive no anybody except your parents.Parents are only the good source to gurd your children.They can understand our problem.
Error: gurd Suggestion: guard
Error: belive Suggestion: believe
flaws:
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.7 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.857 7.5
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
Don't put a space before punctuation marks.
Always put a space after punctuation marks. E-rater is sensitive.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 16 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 4 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 274 350
No. of Characters: 1165 1500
No. of Different Words: 146 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.069 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.252 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.096 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 76 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 43 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 22 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 11 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.7 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.857 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.4 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.312 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.513 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.161 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5