Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justifies while others think it is unfair.
Discuss both views.
There is no doubt that, money is required for survival. Some individuals are in an opinion that sports professionals, who are successful, are remunerated more than any other professions, which is justifiable. While others argue that this is unfair. In this essay, I shall discuss both views with supporting examples.
On the one hand, sportsmen have to put in a lot of hard work; physically, mentally and emotionally in order to be prosperous. Since continued practice and dedication is required, for mastering the sport, for achieving success. To cite an example, Cristiano Ronaldo, who is a famous footballer, had recently shared his success story, wherein he has disclosed his hectic training schedule which begins at 5 am with warm up exercises and ends at 8 pm with practice matches. If, athletics do not work hard, then they will not be able to overcome any shortcomings. As a result, many would agree that the compensation received by them for such dedication is justifiable.
On the other hand, some persons would argue that other professions such as artist receive less attention from various demographics of society, hence remuneration received by them is less. To cite an example, a local music artist, who makes tremendous efforts to entertain people with his music skills, does not receive the same pay as a sportsman would receive for the same efforts. As a result, many believe that professions without the support of media cannot earn well. If people do not receive fair pay for their efforts, then they will be demotivated. As a consequence, many professions are losing scope and individuals believe this to be unfair.
To conclude, there are advantages of being a sportsman however there may be some detrimental effects on other professions which would need to be considered and supported by the government.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, may, so, then, well, while, no doubt, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12333333333 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95929984212 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586666666667 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.1802607743 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.466666667 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46666666667 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169079791102 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646271111334 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711885252674 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11708172451 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0994367976821 0.056905535591 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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