You see the above advertisement for a course designed to help improve your memory. Write a letter to the organisers of the course. You should write at least 150 words. You do not need to write any addresses.
Dear Sir or Madam.
I have seen the advertisement for your Memory Course in the newspaper. I’m an 18-year-old student at ABC University and have a lot of important things to remember. That is the reason I am writing this letter to apply for the course.
A student has many things to learn and remember. My problem is my mind always went blank. If I learn something, it will slip my mind after two hours. I have tried some ways to improve my memory but they brought no efficiency. Could you tell me about the methods used on the course? Could the method help me to bear in mind everything I need?
I also want to know about course fees. As a freshman, I do not have too much money. And could you give me dates of the course? I have free time in every evening so I think the course will have some time suit me.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours faithfully
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam. I have seen the advertisement for your M...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 5.60731707317 464% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 723.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38181818182 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38403012412 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 219.6 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 1.53170731707 588% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 22.4926829268 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.4781866087 43.030603864 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 48.2 112.824112599 43% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.0 22.9334400587 48% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.13333333333 5.23603664747 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184889563248 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579442627968 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624724091503 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0966283613571 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540098067661 0.0819641961636 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.7 13.2329268293 36% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.69 61.2550243902 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 10.3012195122 39% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.94 11.4140731707 61% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.29 8.06136585366 78% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 40.7170731707 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 11.4329268293 44% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.9970731707 58% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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