Dear sir/madam
I am writing in regard to share the experiences of our participants who attended the symposium which was held at your hotel on 12th of this month.
Everyone was really impressed by the way the conference hall was arranged, which exactly complied with our business theme. They were satisfied with the facilities provided by the hotel. Moreover, the staff members were polite and proactive.
However, there were some complaints about the food which left a black mark on your hotel reputation, as most of our clients are high dignitaries. The food served was cold which badly compromised the taste. Especially the hot and sour chicken soup which was supposed to be served hot.
I would like to suggest that a chef should be in charge of the food before it is served, so that the chef will ensure that the food is served at right temperature at right quantity.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully
John thomas
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, moreover, really, so, by the way, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 803.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9263803681 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5682596627 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662576687117 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9830741684 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.3 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1 4.34317383033 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256308070136 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0900396190733 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479614058983 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117093745749 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509211030666 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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