Venus conditions for human presence
The passage and the lecture are both about whether human can live on Venus. The author of the reading believes that planet's conditions are too harsh for human to survive. The lecturer refutes the statements made by the author. He is of the opinion that installing a permanent station for human shelter on Venus is challenging but possible. According to the lecturer, the stating will be flooding in the atmosphere like a balloon instead of being placed on the Venus's surface.
First of all, the author suggests that extremely high atmospheric pressure on Venus would crush spacecrafts and almost anything else. This argument is challenged by the lecturer. He says that while the pressure at Venus's surface is high, that at the level in the air where the station will be located is similar to the normal pressure on Earth. Therefore, there will be no danger of crushing as mentioned in the reading.
Second,the writer contends that there is no supply of water and oxygen on Venus. The article notes that it is also impractical to bring those elements from Earth to the new planet. The lecturer, however, rebuts this point by asserting that these essential factors can be produced from chemical materials obtained directly from Venus' atmosphere. He elaborates on this by mentioning that in the planet's air exist compounds such as carbon dioxide and other gases, which can be treated through chemical process to make water and oxygen
Finally, it is stated in the passage that little sunlight is collected at Venus' surface to generate sufficient amount of solar power. The lecturer, on the other hand, posits that dense clouds only appear in the atmosphere within 50 km from the surface. Above that level where the station will be positioned, the clouds are not so thick. Hence, more sunlight will be attained. Furthermore, he argues that since the solar power cells could take in both direct and indirect sunlight, the station can even use the sunlight reflected on from the cloud layers as well. Consequently, in fact more electricity will be generated to support human life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 172, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ons are too harsh for human to survive. The lecturer refutes the statements made by...
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Line 5, column 7, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...g as mentioned in the reading. Second,the writer contends that there is no supply...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, second, so, therefore, well, while, in fact, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 10.4613686534 201% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 5.04856512141 238% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 22.412803532 107% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 30.3222958057 165% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1736.0 1373.03311258 126% => OK
No of words: 348.0 270.72406181 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98850574713 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.04702891845 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55134873494 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 145.348785872 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543103448276 0.540411800872 100% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 419.366225166 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0662251656 138% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.9160188719 49.2860985944 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4444444444 110.228320801 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 21.698381199 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 7.06452816374 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165009473836 0.272083759551 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572782462502 0.0996497079465 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0880140781826 0.0662205650399 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109973539055 0.162205337803 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11626441611 0.0443174109184 262% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.3589403974 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.8541721854 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.2367328918 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.42419426049 104% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 63.6247240618 146% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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