In the era of globalisation television is the main source of gaining information or news. Some people thinking it as a positive way, however others believe that watching television is a waste of time. I agree with those who think that television is a good medium of news and information.
In this working schedule people hardly find a quality time for themselves so they take television as a stress buster so they watch television on weekends. At present time television provides the information about whole world such as, news , series’s, reality shows, drama and so on. As a result, people find it more enjoyable and its give a peace of mind to anyone and also in between the break it provides the advertisement which give the whole useful information about any product. Further more, watching a television give a chance to family members to shre they day to day happineings. They also spend quality time with sachni others.Hence, people find television as a good source of information and also for spare a quality time with themselves.
It’s undeniable fact that, every garden has weeds. Television also have some disadvantages. At weekends people watch television whole day so they spend less time with family and friends. In some cases child try to copy some dangerous stunts which they show in some dance shows in television. If children spend more time in front of television its also bad for their physical health. Moreover, sometimes children demand some things which they show in television advertisements or in drama series which are out of pocket for their parents. Thus, television also has negative impact on children and adults.
In conclusion, television has both sides positive as well as negative. If people use its in limit so it’s positive way for everyone to reduce a stress. If anyone watch it whole day than it’s have uncountable disadvantageous.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08974358974 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91451211622 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.50641025641 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.3331802874 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2222222222 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172295194787 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629285535908 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632988965235 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117666323232 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595807546793 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.