In the current era, money is the only ways for consumption which is provided by employer to employee, In some nations few individual earn extremely high amount of salaries. Some people adore the ideology that this can be beneficial for country while some argue government should limit the amount of salary that people earn. In this essay i will talk about both view and give my suggestion.
In the one hand, earning the amount of salaries should be high because it will pays for the hardwork of the individual. Firstly, it will be beneficial for the betterment of people's life, they can provide better education to their children and they can also afford the good health facilities. secondly, if the individual earns good amount of the salary then they can also pay tax in a high amount which can be beneficial for government, the money that individual pay for tax can be useful for the government such as ,infrastructure development work.
On the other hand, earning good amount of salary can have a negative effect in the individual personal life. However, earning more money leads to more work.For instance, people can't give more time to their children while they are always busy doing office work, it will also have great effect in family relationship. Moreover, individual can feel tired everytime while working fore more and more hour. Sometime they can also get mental diseases such depression.Furthermore, they can use their money in bad things such as drugs or smoke.
However, earning more salaries can be better in one hand but government should also have limitation in amount of salaried that people ear to reduce such type of personal problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, while, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1388.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97491039427 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74071001265 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501792114695 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.0613242601 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.181818182 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3636363636 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5454545455 7.06120827912 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.386772303443 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172074991145 0.084324248473 204% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119910739438 0.0667982634062 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.281062129626 0.151304729494 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135848276479 0.056905535591 239% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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