Dear Mr. David
I am writing in regard with a birthday party which was held at your hotel on july 9th. I would like to express my sincere gratitude to the entire team who supported us and my grandmother's ninetieth birthday celebration a most memorable one.
I thank you for the exemplary arrangements that you made for the party. All of those who attended the function shared their appreciation for such a well organised ceremony. It was a dinner event from 8:00pm to 10:00pm which became success because of the impeccable service provided by your staff.
My grandmother was overwhelmed when she saw the sitting arrangement as well as the live music. This was a wonderful platform to share some moments with the close ones. She was deliriously happy when she met her childhood friends after a long time. Moreover the musicians made the atmosphere heavenly with their ethereal music.
Please accept my gratitude and extend my regards to your staff.
Yours sincerely
Thomas
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ay celebration a most memorable one. I thank you for the exemplary arrangement...
^
Line 7, column 249, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...er childhood friends after a long time. Moreover the musicians made the atmosphere heave...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 825.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03048780488 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69963615986 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.69512195122 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2718309735 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.0 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9090909091 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196867931539 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654687391126 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686959784349 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0997204046989 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692276532356 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.