How can we measure the effectiveness of a country's leaders? From my perspective it cannot be measured only by the well-being of that country's citizens, there are another aspects must be regarded to measure their effectiveness.
First, the country's achievements in science, arts, and the advancement in the technologies must be concedered as much as the well-being of that country's citizens because these achievements are essential for the country to be strong and effective member in the world for instance, USA achievements in the last sectors made it dominant on the whole world, therefore, effective leaders must lead their country to this success.
second, the percentage of both unemployment and ignorance of the country is very good reflector of the effectiveness of their leaders due to if a good portion of citizens are unemployed or ignorant that refer to the misery in the country for example India ranked a developed country and it has a very strong economy, but it has a very high percentage of unemployment and ignorance by that a big portion of their citizens are in misery, thus, good leaders must rescue their country from misery.
finally, i must acknowledge that the effectiveness of a country's leaders not measured only by those aspects because some countries are in the phase of developing they did not have great achievement in science and other sectors and they have big portion of their citizens are unemployed and ignorant, but they are fighting all of these and trying to get out from misery.Thus their leaders are very effective.
In conclusion, the effectiveness of a country's leaders is measured by a lot of aspects and not only the well-being of that county's citizens.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, second, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 2235.4752809 64% => OK
No of words: 281.0 442.535393258 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09252669039 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01347639896 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 215.323595506 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.44128113879 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 448.2 704.065955056 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.2370786517 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 23.0359550562 200% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 165.225855523 60.3974514979 274% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 238.5 118.986275619 200% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 46.8333333333 23.4991977007 199% => OK
Discourse Markers: 19.0 5.21951772744 364% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 10.2758426966 10% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233431298481 0.243740707755 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169294257456 0.0831039109588 204% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543483048399 0.0758088955206 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175129013544 0.150359130593 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669703914012 0.0667264976115 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.0 14.1392134831 184% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.79 48.8420337079 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.2 12.1743820225 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.13 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 100.480337079 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.8971910112 164% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.4 11.2143820225 182% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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