The layout demonstrates a health center in two separate era and the changes which had happened by now.
The layout demonstrates a health center in two separate era and the changes which had happened by now.
Overall, as can be seen, there are significant changes in the relocation and construction of some new facilities in the health center from 2005 to the present day.
Comparing the plans it is crystal clear that car parking has increased nearly threefold accommodating 30 spaces. Also, the entrance exchanged its location situating at the back of the health center in 2005 and locates in the east of the building now. In addition, a children's play area has been built facing the reception desk which was situated at the center of the health club in 2005. Furthermore, a minor operations room is added to the center adjacent to physiotherapy remaining intact in the time span. CR1, CR2, and CR3 had changed their position by now and shrank in terms of their size and a new CR4 has been built since 2005. Finally, the ladders locating at the bottom of the center in 2005 altered their locations in the present day.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-02-12 | Mohammad Khaleghi Esfahani | 78 | view |
- It is true to say that in the new millennium and by the advent of technological devices involving smartphones and security cameras people are being watched constantly. 78
- The layout demonstrates various stages undertaken in order to produce customer products and the way information is return to previous steps. 89
- It is true to say that in the new millennium people pay too much attention to monetary things 89
- In the new millennium, the crime rate has hit a new record in some of the metropolitan cities. 67
- It is true to say that in the new millennium and due to the consumerism culture, some citizens borrow money in order to purchase various products and facilities which do not use and cost an arm and a leg sometimes. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 57, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'era' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'eras'.
Suggestion: eras
...strates a health center in two separate era and the changes which had happened by n...
^^^
Line 3, column 746, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...red their locations in the present day.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, furthermore, if, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 842.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75706214689 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63551904026 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593220338983 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 18.3230558314 43.030603864 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.25 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.125 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389972206775 0.215688989381 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.193754016397 0.103423049105 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.307711503392 0.0843802449381 365% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.426972578402 0.15604864568 274% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.40557482655 0.0819641961636 495% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.