the charts below show the percentage of water for different purposes in six areas of the world
The given pie charts illustrate the proportion of using a water for various targets in six regions around the world.
In general, it can be seen that the highest consumption of water was in central Asia region for agricultural purpose. While the lowest consuming of water was in Europe continent for farming section
To begin with industrial use, it can be observed that the consumption of water was 53% in Europe. Whereas, the consuming declined slightly by 5% (48%) in north America. In addition, the water consumption went down in the south East Asia, South America, Africa, and central Asia to 12%, 10%, 7%, 5% respectively.
Turning to Agricultural use, it can be witnessed that the consuming of water stood on 88% per cent in central Asia which is considered a huge increasing if compared with consumption water for industrial use. in South east Asia decreased slowly by 7% ( 81%). The little use of water for agricultural use was in Europe by 32%.
Finally, for domestic use, the South America was the largest region in consuming water by 19%. However, the little consumption of water was in central Asia and South east Asia by 7%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, so, whereas, while, in addition, in general, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 945.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84615384615 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70213104106 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497435897436 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 288.0 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.3967974147 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162960403987 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814983270768 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692412690917 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125020629002 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0699255399022 0.0819641961636 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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